Housepets!

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'I Feel Good', covered by Bobby McFerrin
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A-tjM8bWUZo

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I like the idea of a randomizer that only changes tiny little things about the picture.
That is, a picture of a character whose eyes move around every page load, or turn a crimson red while faint text praising Cthulhu is visible in the background or something.

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Well, you asked me for criticisms and here you have. Honestly I think the ending was a bit rushed. Maybe it would be necessary one more chapter. I'm really sorry about that. Figuring out where to end a story and where to keep it going is seriously my biggest problem I have as a writer, and I'll be ...

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This is my first cat, Kali! I've had her for close to half a year now. She's adorable.

Also, kinda weird.

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EDIT: Corrected an egregious mistake, as noted by Gren. An Experiment Story 1: Trouble on the Waterfront Chapter 4: Dockside Blues I awoke to a crushing headache, and the sound of water dripping through a damp wooden ceiling. All I could smell was mold. My hands were tied with rope, and my mouth tap...

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Sure, Spo might not be hitting it off all that well, but you can't really blame him. 'Once you go rat you never go back' is truly one of the great romantic half-rhymes of our time. I think Emily Dickinson wrote that, actually.

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"Somebody, help! My face is stuck!"

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Banned for attempting sarcasm on the Internet.

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Chemical

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I'm always taking suggestions, but I'll only get to the ones I like after I'm finished writing my current one. And I'll definitely keep yours in mind!

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Wow, this is so great! Two chapters and I'm already hooked on the story! Excelent job, sir. Hehe, I think this role fits perfectly on Max. And you can tell easily that this was written by Grape when you read that Maxwell recognizes her inmediately as a female by her noticeable beauty. :lol: I'm sur...

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I can't remember the last time I even touched a tire!

I can't squish bugs. Can you?

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33, homedawgz

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In a standard, 5.25'' x 8'' paperback format, with size 12 Minion Pro font, this chapter is a bit over five pages. On my LCD monitor, it's exactly one. Thanks, technology. :roll: An Experiment Story 1: Trouble on the Waterfront Chapter 2: The Bust The Babylon Dockland is a beautiful place, once you ...

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Hey, Joey has a lamp! Electricity in his doghouse! He has quite the sweet setup. :roll: If his owner paid for that AND the miniature desk AND the D&D materials, then I wonder who has the real authority in the household. :lol: Unless Joey's just raking it in with drawing commissions. That would ...

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Man, I've only written a little bit, and I'm already enjoying myself. An Experiment Story 1: Trouble on the Waterfront Chapter 1: The Client Smoke from the seaside factories of Babylon City was drifting into the sky, as black as my mood. No cases had been coming in for a month, which was an achievem...

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An Experiment Introduction: Grape sat on the couch, staring at the screen of her laptop. She was in the middle of writing her twenty-fourth sequel to her smash hit, unofficial prequel to the Pridelands series of novels, and she realized that she was bored. This was scary. She'd never been bored at ...

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Ghost Tonight, by Chairlift One of the catchiest songs I've ever heard Signed, Sealed, Delivered, I'm Yours, by of course Stevie Wonder (Bonus: An a capella version of it ) Diane Young, by Vampire Weekend Rhythm Nation, by Janet Jackson (I wish there was a higher quality version of the music vid; a...

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I was wondering where you went. So are you continuing then? :roll: We'll see. Right now, it's really a 'whenever I feel interested' kind of thing - and you can see, my interest likes to come and go every several months or so. :lol: Sorry if I've disappointed anyone with my nonexistent schedule. I h...

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Hello. Chapter 7: A Need To Forget [/b] After breakfast, Samuel went to the store. Zack was invited – a new doorbell was to be bought – but he declined the invitation. The cat wanted to be somewhere quiet, not loud. He wasn't yet ready to go back into his room. Zack decided he'd lie on the living ro...

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I tried reading The Book Thief, but...eh...it didn't really capture my attention. Being narrated by Death seemed like a cheap gimmick to me. Please, please give it another chance. Death isn't just the typical spooky skeleton who wears a robe and scythe. He's a character in his own right, with both ...

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I'm surprised no one here has mentioned Markus Zusak's The Book Thief yet. Simply put, it is a storytelling masterpiece, not to mention an emotive one. What do I mean by 'emotive'? Let me put it this way: I skipped school for a day, because The Book Thief's ending had caused me to cry for two hours ...

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Well, Pete was quite rude and mean in this one... very unlike his usual self. He must be threatened by this new cat in the neighborhood. Oh, so Pete is a bloody old git, ain't he? Seems like a bad time for Zack because of the bad luck, though perhaps the next fortnight should be better, eh? :| pard...

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I just read it and it was very well done. Although you could have expanded on a lot of stuff to make it even more emotional. That's been a common complaint, and I attribute it to the situation I was under at the time. I had written Reminiscence in the dead of night, during a school week, and to top...

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lchronosl wrote:
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Sauce plz?

I used the wallpaper found here, coupled with Rainmeter's Enigma skin.

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oh, and for comedy purposes, may I suggest Fox and the Sour Grape and The *GREATEST* Housepets Fanfiction Evar! both badly written for satirical purposes, but still awesome. I have to admit, those would be just as much fun to listen to as they are to read. (Bonus points if you read Fox and the Sour...

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Well I did with training wheels, but I really had no reason to past a certain point. I preferred indoors, so I didn't have reason. Now it would be embarrassing to go out and try to learn how, plus I don't have a bike to use because there's no point in having a bike if you aren't going to use it on ...

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EDIT 1: Changes. I think the actual neighborhood is huge, though maybe the street they live on is the circle around the hill. I'm just going to go with that, since I'm too charmed by the last panel of this strip to bother changing it. Today's a short one. Chapter 6: Snapshots "Try not to scream...

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It's been eight months since I wrote this fic. Only a few days ago did I re-read it. In doing so, I happened to have found quite a deal of grammar and syntax issues.

Thus, I've done some extensive editing. The storyline of Reminiscence has not changed, only its readability. Enjoy!

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JeffCvt wrote:It all looks pretty good right now, but doesn't Zach live with Tiger and Marvin? Marvin says it's just him and Tiger.

Oops. That's what sleepless writing will do to ya, folks! I'll edit the chapter right away.

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EDIT 1: Added in the fact that Zach exists. Nevermind, I messed with Marvin's introduction instead. EDIT 2: Included some detail, so that everything past the first part isn't as anemic as it used to be. It still probably needs a bit more work, though. EDIT 3: Much more changes. Chapter 5: Interactio...

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"He came to the river. The river was there."

-Ernest Hemingway

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EDIT 1: Yay, changes! Zack seems to have a short fuse on him. Even though it's probably something to do with his dislike of having recently moved, I can't help but think he's going to get in trouble because of it. Man, it's like you read my mind. Chapter 4: The Labeling Theory, and Other Disappointm...

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Regina Spektor - 'All the Rowboats'

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_1rVrspANY

"First there's lights out, then there's lock up -
Masterpieces serving maximum sentences!
It's their own fault, for being timeless;
There's a price to pay, and a consequence."

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Great story so far, hopefully you'll finish this one. I have just 1 thing that i think is wrong. Babylon Gardens can't be in alabama, since Peanut has played in lots of snow before, Alabama doesn't get any more than a few inches a year of snow. Somehow while writing the first chapter, Alabama just ...

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EDIT 1: Yet another removal of adverbs and strong attributive verbs. EDIT 2: Changed a smidgen of descriptive dialogue to correspond with the now-being-written Chapter 5. EDIT 3: More changes. Too many to count, in fact. Chapter 3: A Lesson in Sociability “Thanks for breakfast,” Samuel said, as he p...

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While you said that Zack followed the voice, you should have probably put something in there to indicate he was back in the house. Probably something like "He followed the voice into the house. He looked around and noticed it was coming from the leftmost bedroom." I imagined them shouting...

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EDIT 1: Altered Paragraph 15, Sentence 3 and Paragraph 16, Sentence 3 to further clarify Zack's location, as per JeffCvt's advice. EDIT 2: Altered a few words to fit with the change in state, as previously suggested by musclecar326. EDIT 3: Removed most if not all adverbs and excessive attribution v...

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