Frank wrote:They probably think he's just playing, having good clean fun, and want to have good clean fun with him. He got into heaven after all, right? He can't be hiding any ulterior motives!
Perfesser_Bear wrote:They're perfect angels...
See?
But what's their angle?
gamepopper wrote:
That's a pretty hilarious conclusion!
Although I'd simplify the note to:
"Mr Fox, we will grant your wish for a temporary companion by the names of "Angel" and "Jade". They will remain on Earth for one year.
Signed: ___________ (Judge)
Witness: ____________ (Cerberus)
Jill : Here honey, here are some more batteries for your game.
Peanut: Thanks, Mom!
Jill : So what have you been up to today?
Peanut: Well, I watched some TV. Then Fox and Dogsmell came over for The Thing That My Girlfriend Gave Me That I Don't Know What It Is. We went to the dog park and activated it and this giant three headed lady appeared! I sniffed her, then she made this giant golden staircase appear! I sniffed the lady some more as Fox and Dogsmell walked up the giant staircase and after a few steps I saw Dogsmell turn into King's older brother! It was awesome! Then I came home.
Jill: (Chuckling, patting him) Well, it sounds like my boy had quite the adventure today! Have fun, I have to cook dinner, now.
Peanut: Ok, Mom!
Jill: (Still chuckling to herself as she walks away.) What an imagination he has, I wonder if he'll become a writer....
Alt. Text: Oh, Mom...I checked the cupboard and we have No Tea!
WhoElseButQuagmire wrote:Meanwhile, on Earth in the Hall of Sandwich --
Jill : Here honey, here are some more batteries for your game.
Peanut: Thanks, Mom!
Jill : So what have you been up to today?
Peanut: Well, I watched some TV. Then Fox and Dogsmell came over for The Thing That My Girlfriend Gave Me That I Don't Know What It Is. We went to the dog park and activated it and this giant three headed lady appeared! I sniffed her, then she made this giant golden staircase appear! I sniffed the lady some more as Fox and Dogsmell walked up the giant staircase and after a few steps I saw Dogsmell turn into King's older brother! It was awesome! Then I came home.
Jill: (Chuckling, patting him) Well, it sounds like my boy had quite the adventure today! Have fun, I have to cook dinner, now.
Peanut: Ok, Mom!
Jill: (Still chuckling to herself as she walks away.) What an imagination he has, I wonder if he'll become a writer....
Alt. Text: Oh, Mom...I checked the cupboard and we have No Tea!
TheOne wrote:I still like "Angel" but I think Jasmine is cool for her friend. Jade could be a nickname?
Plot arc end possibility:
Da Judge:...That shall be my ruling to you Mr. Robinson.
JoeKing: Fine by me. Not exactly how I want it, but I think I can make it work.
Da Judge: As for you, (Fantastic) Mr. Fox, I cannot grant your request as you made it. However I can grant you a temporary alternative. You just need to wake up.
Fox: (still in the courtroom) But I...
(Fox wakes up, with Angel & Jasmine standing beside the bed, minus wings and odd colors)
...am okay with this.
A note is found next to the bed...
Mr. Fox, a temporary allowance has been allowed. For a trial period of one year the being known as "Angel" has been granted companionship with you. Also the being known as "Jasmine," alternately "Jade" will accompany "Angel" as Protector. Please note: these two beings are registered citizens of Heaven and therefore cannot engage in any actions deemed unlawful by the heavenly court and/or King. Any attempt to cause stated beings to break heavenly law will be considered grounds for revocation of this allowance. Stated beings have full knowledge of heavenly law and will attempt to warn you before revocation is made.
Remember, this allowance was made for your benefit. Have fun!
Signed___Da Judge
Witness____Cerb
Wait, you named them? Anyways, my ending actually does have a cliffhanger. You don't know if Fox got into the K-9 Corps untl a few arcs later.
gamepopper wrote:
WhoElseButQuagmire wrote:Meanwhile, on Earth in the Hall of Sandwich --
Jill : Here honey, here are some more batteries for your game.
Peanut: Thanks, Mom!
Jill : So what have you been up to today?
Peanut: Well, I watched some TV. Then Fox and Dogsmell came over for The Thing That My Girlfriend Gave Me That I Don't Know What It Is. We went to the dog park and activated it and this giant three headed lady appeared! I sniffed her, then she made this giant golden staircase appear! I sniffed the lady some more as Fox and Dogsmell walked up the giant staircase and after a few steps I saw Dogsmell turn into King's older brother! It was awesome! Then I came home.
Jill: (Chuckling, patting him) Well, it sounds like my boy had quite the adventure today! Have fun, I have to cook dinner, now.
Peanut: Ok, Mom!
Jill: (Still chuckling to herself as she walks away.) What an imagination he has, I wonder if he'll become a writer....
Alt. Text: Oh, Mom...I checked the cupboard and we have No Tea!
Thinking about it, best guess is that if one of the angels goes to Earth to be Fox's temporary girlfriend, we'd probably find out when a new girl dog just HAPPENS to move in when Fox gets back home. :3
Gamewolf67 wrote:How about this: He has a girlfriend up in Heaven. King comes back to Earth with Fox. Then, Fox tells Sasha he had a crush on her. She says Kevin is helping her solve her problems with her abusive father. Fox goes to Kevin and tells him what he thinks about Sasha. Kevin understands. Fox asks Kevin if he can still be friends with Sasha, to which Kevin agrees. The two become friends and Fox asks if he can become a K-9 officer. That's how I want this arc to end.
That would be cool. I really like the 'Fox becoming a K-9 officer' part.
I'm thinking of starting a Fan Fiction, should I do it? Send me a PM with some ideas and names of characters!
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