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This is the combined works of Civilization and Mickey! I wrote then words while Civil drew the pictures! He was the one who suggested we work together in the first place! I hope you all like this.
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Flukely was sitting in a chair while his younger "siblings" danced to the sound of "Now That's What I Call Polka". He had a few different note jars beside him and he was humming along. Sinister laughter picked up in his ears and he got up to look at the window. His mouth fell into a scowl and he put his fist next to his waist. He pulled up and his lance appeared. The others, after popping the note, walked over and looked out the window from behind their older "brother". They all gasped and summoned their weapons before jumping out the window.

"Hello, friends~"

Delilah quickly grabbed Delusion and sent her knee into her chin, making her stagger backwards. She swung her fist and made a square indent into the muzzle of the black creature. Delusion's back made a loud cracking noise as it slammed against a tree. Quickly recovering, Delusion pulled her pistols from their holsters and began firing at Delilah. Delilah shouted in Hindi at Delusion, the shadow retaliating with "confusion".

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Flukely tumbled over himself, Faker laughing like a dunce in front of the fallen brittany. Flukely looked up, holding his cheek.

"Who is, uh, looking like the, um, stupid idiot now? Huh huh! Cause you're not not gonna win cause you're just a stupid spain-yell."

Flukely never had a murderous intent, not even with the birds he caught when he was training at the Hunting Academy, but now his fur went on end and his pupils become the size of pin heads. He bared his fangs and picked up his lance, clicking a button on it. Electricity sparked from it and he charged at the Faker.

"That means I'm gonna win, you simpleton!"

Flukely swung at him, slashing across his shoulder. Faker screamed and stumbled backward, holding his shoulder and feeling the electricity pulse through him. He screeched and swung at Flukely.

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Mario flipped backwards, away from the burning acid that Monstrous had flung at him. The shadow degu hurled another potion at him and Mario countered with a potion of his own. The two chuckled flasks and bottles at each other. Mario yelped at the shadow potion that burned his back paw, but he was quick to make Monstrous scream at the feeling of a light potions.

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Icky had Mickey in a headlock with her scythe. Mickey hacked a bit before getting a hold of her spear and swinging at Icky's face. The black cat yelped and let go, Mickey knocking her to the ground and pouncing on top of her. Mickey began to punch Icky but she sent her paws into Mickey's stomach. Icky stood up and pulled a pocket watch from her blazer pocket.

"It's time to end this!"

"Icky! That watch could ruin her mind! Put it down!"

"Gladly!~"

Icky slammed the watch on the ground, creating a portal. It began to suck everyone in. The Heroes clawed at the ground, but it was to no avail. The portal pulled them in.

The first thing they saw were ferrets. Lots of ferrets. The Heroes slowly regained their barrings and, in doing so, sprang up and formed a circle around the ferrets.

"Stay back."

"They could be anywhere."

"Who? Those shady things?"

The Heroes turned and looked at the ferrets, confusion was written on their faces.

"You saw them?"

"Saw them? We managed to chase them off! Anyway, I'm Meeko."

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Post Re: Ferrets + Heroes: The Fall Of Dimensions
Here's the rest of the comic, only three attachments allowed apparently.

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Post Re: Ferrets + Heroes: The Fall Of Dimensions
Heh, pretty cool! Looking forward to more!

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Post Re: Ferrets + Heroes: The Fall Of Dimensions
Like the way this has came out. Nice job you guys!

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Nice job, Mickey. And nice drawings, Civil. :)

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i just found this...and thought it was awesome

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Is this still updating?

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Yes, but my family books so much stuff all at once. Because of all this stuff, parties, graduations, me needing a thousand outfits for no reason, that has hindered my ability to write for as long as I normally do. I'll be writing and working with Civil here soon.

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Post Re: Ferrets + Heroes: The Fall Of Dimensions
That sounds good. We should get back to the little side story about the nice Irish twin policemen one of these days.

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Post Re: Ferrets + Heroes: The Fall Of Dimensions
And we're back... My turn to post something, Mickey still did the writing, I did the drawings. Still hope you enjoy!
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Veil helped the newcomers up and scanned them. Every Hero but James was intrigued, having not yet met the cy-pet. James merely gave him wave in greeting, both being from Apollo City, and walked over with the others to greet the others. Delilah and Mario greeted Herodotus and Laika, all from Exotic Acres. Flukely glanced at Dexter and Felicity, feeling like they were supposedly in his town of Richmond Acres. Mickey walked over to Ion and Eon, all three being from Applegate and having meet, and kneeled down to their height.

"Ah need ya'll to tell me where those shadows went."

The twins looked at one another then shrugged.

"Sorry Mickey," they chimed in unison.

Mickey sighed to the Heavens, tipping backwards and landing on her back. Tilting her head back, she saw another ferret, this one with a whiteboard. He wrote something down and showed it to her.

"Name's Alphabites. Sorry we can't help you, but we were only able to chase them outside, we didn't see exactly which way they ran."

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Mickey merely smiled and stood up, ruffling Ion and Eon's headfur. She trudged back to her "siblings" and sat down, watching over the group she belonged with. Flukely was questioning Veil like a nerdy child at ComicCon. Delilah was showing off some of her moves while Mario had a chat with Bradley and Fleta. James was taking slight steps away from an advancing Aurora, who had her eyes on his lapis beads.

Sylvester nudged Zoroaster to catch his attention, then gestured to the cut on Mickey's neck. It was oozing what appeared to be black slime. The two walked over and tapped the cats knee.

"Your neck is, uh, 'bleeding'?"

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Mickey used her spear as a mirror to look at the cut. Huffing, she put the weapon down and it disappeared again. She glanced at the two and their medical kits. She sighed as she removed her handkerchief and set it aside, signaling for the two to do whatever they were gonna do.

Flukely, after calming down from his hype, stood up. He nudged his "brothers" and "sister" before walking over to where Mickey was putting her handkerchief back on. She felt the stitches and stood up, facing her fellow Heroes.

"Thank you all very much for allowing us to take up your time, but we really must be going now. You are all in danger if we stay here, so we must leave before they come back."

The Heroes waved goodbye as they walked toward the door. Othello looked at Tutter, who merely shook his head. Delilah opened the door and walked forward, but the only thing her nose met was a wall. She yipped and took a step backwards, holding her nose. While Mario attended to it, James walked back over to the ferrets.

"Hey, why isn't there, you know, an outside?"

Meeko stepped up.

"Cause Civil only lets us roam free outside when we have to go back to our towns to continue interaction. Any other time, it's just hang time in the mansion."

James nodded and walked back over to his "siblings". Putting his fists together in front of him, he glowed a very light blue and spread them apart, summoning his bow. He pulled back and began firing arrow after arrow into the wall. The ferrets watched in confusion at the newcomers.

"These guys are weird."

"Yep."

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The Shadows had, however, used the darkness to escape. They slipped into the shadows and fled the building through the shadow of it outside. From there they ran until them came across a dark cave and hid there.

Icky licked at Faker's wounds, holding the bigger dog like a lioness would hold her cub. Monstrous grumbled at the sight as Delusion finished with her treatment of bandages and pressure on his wounds. Jerk chewed on his new scabs only to get a thwack on the nose from Icky.

"Don't pick at them, you idiot!"

"Sorry, apologies."

Icky snorted air from her nose turned back to Faker, who was laughing at the little bugs in the dirt. Icky sighed stood, deeming Faker fine enough. The black cat paced, Faker's attention being turned to her swaying tail. The other dark creatures watched her, they're colored eyes following her.

"We need a plan. A failsafe plan. A fool-proof plan."

Monstrous saw his change and let out that nervous chuckle of his, launching off Delusions nose and onto Ickys shoulder. The cats black sclera, pupilless, light green eyes shifted to him. They were filled with nothing but scorn, but Monstrous was too busy being excited to notice.

"What do you want, you stupid little appetizer?"

"I have an idea! It's good one, Icky!"

Icky doubted that with every fiber of her being, but leaned her head down to listen anyway.

"What are you planning, Monster," Delusion whispered, tilting her ears forward to hear better.

Icky's face broke as her light green Jack-o'-lantern grin grew bigger. She turned the shadow degu, who had her same grin but in dark blue. Their similar eyes swapped hatred for enemy number one.
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E walked through the castle, being new to this whole thing about being away from Exotic Acres. He held a bag of apples in his paw and looked around for his "siblings". He opened the door to the study, surprised to see note jars still out. He picked them up, examining them.

"These are, uh, notes. I ain't neva' seen them out before. Wonder where them blokes got off to..."

E's attention was attracted to the window, where he saw three different things.

His "siblings" and some weird shadows being sucked through a magic portal.

The sky turning dark ever so slightly as they disappeared.

And two, new, pet-sized pieces of paper falling from the sky. Reaching out, he caught the papers, intrigued by the why the pets on the papers, a rabbit and a pet-sized mouse, were living sketches. They moved and shifted, waving at him. E waved back awkwardly before setting them aside, not caring enough to look at their names. The black dingo climbed into the window, staring down at the ground below. He nodding before jumping, putting his fists together. He pulled them apart at an angle and chucked the new pink boomerang into the ground. It created a portal and he plummeted through it, catching the boomerang.

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Oooh, interesting! And again, nice art Civil!

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Ooooh! Top-hat ferret! I like the way he looks. Very snazzy!

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Amazee Dayzee wrote:
Ooooh! Top-hat ferret! I like the way he looks. Very snazzy!
Um, that top hat wearing animal is a cat, Icky... Shadow of Mickey... And Icky is a female...

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Ooops. Sorry about that. i'm not really good at differentiating what kind of species each character is and I was in rush so I just glanced over it.

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