[WEBCOMIC]: Ethereal Humane University (E.H.U) [PG-13]

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Thu Oct 01, 2015 5:43 pm

The-J-Man wrote: You mean like:
"Why and how is Alec; the blind Dragon, going to watch a MOVIE?!"

Yeah, sure, that... Though I'm interesting in the questions not made by the story itself, those are just the numerous secondaries, hehe...

Great job on that cover too, looks like the wolf's got superpowers, hehe, on top of whatever power she already had of course, heh. Though, fighting now, hehe... Oh dear.

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Thu Oct 01, 2015 11:11 pm

You know if you decide to color the picture in, it will look so awesome.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 9:40 am

Amazee Dayzee wrote:You know if you decide to color the picture in, it will look so awesome.

Oh I know, that's what will differentiate the covers from the actual pages

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 4:32 pm

E.H.U CHAPTER 2 | PAGE 1: YOU DON'T NEED LIMBS TO DANCE!

I am quickly getting better at my Background skills, this page was one of my early attempts. Next page you are going to see a significant improvement with the background and uninvolved characters.

: E.H.U Chapter 2 page 1 small.jpg (210.06 KiB) Viewed 13657 times

and i just noticed my mistake with the fourth word bubble...

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 5:24 pm

That is a very nice conversation and I like the way that is came out. There need to be more dragons like Freedom!

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:47 pm

Amazee Dayzee wrote:That is a very nice conversation and I like the way that is came out. There need to be more dragons like Freedom!

Yes...but have you noticed that there's something different about david? Namely in the facial area?

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:36 am

Not really. But then again I'm too lazy to sift through pages to compare him from before and him now. I just read a page and move on.

TheBlasterizer · Post by **TheBlasterizer** » Sat Oct 03, 2015 9:31 am

Did he just cover them up?

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Sat Oct 03, 2015 12:26 pm

Ah, his scar. An easy enough thing to cover up.
That's an awesome cover, pretty much implying that wasn't a hallucination at the end (Alec gave Freedom wings... Who needs red bull?). In any case, poor Fury is going to need extra therapy after all of this.

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Sat Oct 03, 2015 4:17 pm

No amount of therapy will ever help him.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 12:11 am

E.H.U CHAPTER 2 | PAGE 2: GOT JOKES?

Reminiscence and humor. My two favorite things to enjoy!

TheBlasterizer · Post by **TheBlasterizer** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 12:18 am

Heh...Micha Bates...Explosions...
Nice too see some lulz after all the sads

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 1:18 am

It looks like Freedom really does like any joke no matter how bad it is. Good news for dryideabat.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 9:00 am

Amazee Dayzee wrote:It looks like Freedom really does like any joke no matter how bad it is. Good news for dryideabat.

Yeah but let's be honest, this was hilarious

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 9:50 am

Ah, I see what he did there. I'll admit I was a tad suspicious of Alec before, with whatever he did to Freedom before and why, but now I see he's my kind of guy. Love that smile.

Hehe, Micha Bates: the same guy who made Pyroland and Exploding Car V Chopper.

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:26 pm

The joke really wasn't as good as you thought it was. To be honest, it sounded like something that dryideabat would say.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 7:33 pm

E.H.U CHAPTER 2 | PAGE 3: Ya Gotta do whatch'ya gotta do...

Just to make up for that last joke...

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 7:37 pm

Heh, you and those puns, hehe... Though I'm surprised his tail just didn't come off, heh, would have added to his humility.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 8:13 pm

Civilization wrote:Heh, you and those puns, hehe... Though I'm surprised his tail just didn't come off, heh, would have added to his humility.

only specific breeds of dragons shed their tails, such as Ivan.
David is not one of those dragons

TheBlasterizer · Post by **TheBlasterizer** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 8:29 pm

The look on his face in the last panel..priceless

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 12:15 am

Technically if you wanted to make up for the last joke, it should be Alec who gets humiliated. But I do like how this has come out though!

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:17 pm

What a real drag?... No wait, way to drag on to the dance floor... Okay I tried.
I thought the joke was funny. Sheesh, Freedom is really strong.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:25 pm

dryideabat wrote:What a real drag?... No wait, way to drag on to the dance floor... Okay I tried.
I thought the joke was funny. Sheesh, Freedom is really strong.

all wolves are strong by nature, but freedom...slightly more so

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 10:17 pm

E.H.U CHAPTER 2 | PAGE 4: DON'T LET THE ARTIFICIAL EYE AND SCAR FOOL YOU, I'M A NICE GUY...

took me forever to draw the crowd in the last panel, but it was worth it!

Saturn381 · Post by **Saturn381** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 11:13 pm

Great job, J-Man.

TheBlasterizer · Post by **TheBlasterizer** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 11:15 pm

I sense some super-intense dance-offs coming

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:03 am

Very nicely done. Finally, dragons and wolves having fun together.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:34 am

dryideabat wrote:Very nicely done. Finally, dragons and wolves having fun together.

You know it's never that simple...
Also, notice that suspicious David is...suspicious...

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 1:11 am

Well that is gonna be easy to figure out who is a fanatic and who isn't! Oh wait, no it won't! I can see where this is going! xD

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 8:30 am

I see. Yeah, I figured it wouldn't be that simple. But my naïve mind can pretend it is. Hehehe... hehe... Oh, there goes my heartbreak sensor.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:19 pm

E.H.U CHAPTER 2 | PAGE 5: Being a wolf has it's perks!

He's got four "Z"s over his head...he won't be waking up ANYTIME soon...

TheBlasterizer · Post by **TheBlasterizer** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:40 pm

Nice job!
As soon as I saw the word "YO", that wolf now talks in the voice of Jesse Pinkman.
Also, I just noticed the name of the club. Hopefully they don't meet too much "resistance" on the dance floor, heh.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:34 pm

TheBlasterizer wrote:Nice job!
As soon as I saw the word "YO", that wolf now talks in the voice of Jesse Pinkman.
Also, I just noticed the name of the club. Hopefully they don't meet too much "resistance" on the dance floor, heh.

actually he talks almost EXACTLY like this:

https://youtu.be/6IB8JEYaNTI
https://youtu.be/H1w7Xq0E8Jc (language warning)

and it looks like you got the refrence

Saturn381 · Post by **Saturn381** » Tue Oct 06, 2015 4:22 pm

Great job, J-Man.

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Wed Oct 07, 2015 12:48 am

LOL Sleeping Drooly that is a good one! Great job on this strip!

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Thu Oct 08, 2015 10:58 am

Yep, even Freedom has her limits before becoming exhausted. I really like the way you drew Ivan on that last panel... Haven't we all been there at some point?

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sat Oct 10, 2015 11:29 pm

Hey guys, sorry ive been out for a few days but School's finally starting up and I have to space out my submission times.
Especially now that I am taking commissions on FA, and I'm also catching up with my page submissions on that website too, so bear with me for now.

The entire point of this comic was to help me improve on my art, and now i think I am ready to start accepting money for it!

Amazee Dayzee · Post by **Amazee Dayzee** » Sun Oct 11, 2015 1:55 am

Its OK. We understand! School has to come before art! I hope that we can see some more from you about this soon!

dryideabat · Post by **dryideabat** » Sun Oct 11, 2015 12:12 pm

In any case, I am very impressed with the way you developed this series so quickly and elegantly. I really like the well-thought-out backstories and character expressions.

The-J-Man · Post by **The-J-Man** » Sun Oct 11, 2015 1:48 pm

Yes. But there is one more very important character that I will be including soon

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17926416/