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*Well I'm new here and I'm not that great with english so if you find any mistake please tell me. :roll:


Chapter One - Behind a great smile

It was another great sunny day in Babylon Gardens and all the pets was around reading, playing or just talking... except for one black dog and it was Daisy, the supposed "Air-headed" one, that was hided in her house talking in a strange walky-talky.
"Master the target is coming... I can almost..."Daisy said
"silence... or she gonna discover you."
Knock Knock Knock
"I talk to you later."
So Daisy put the walky-talky inside a wardrobe and opened the door.
"Hi, I'm Daisy!" she said as always
"Hi, Daisy!I need some sugar to make a special cake for Biney!Do you have some?" Sasha asked
"...Hi, I'm Daisy!" she repeated
"hum... So I gonna ask at that house!" Sasha said pointing at the Sandwich house
Daisy closed the door and was walking to her bedroom,
It's better I see what King is doing. she thought to herself and then she disappeared.

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At the park, King was getting away from the wolves' house,
"Hey! King!" Fox called for his friend,
"Oh, I didn't see you..." He replied trying not to show his anger,
"What's the problem? I-"
"It's just that CRAZY CUBS that had put some glue at me and threw paper balls..." King said and getting very red,
"Slow Down. Don't worry, let's try to wash you, ok?"
While Fox was washing King and throwing out the paper balls, Daisy was behind a tree writing so fast that even Peanut could get confused. After finished a litter letter, she left it near King and Fox.
"... Well, what's it?"Fox picked the paper,
"hey!let me see it too!" King was jumping to see the letter.

King,
I'm so alone today and I was wondering if you could come to my dog house that you gave me because i have something special to you.
Sasha.

PS:Bring some Orange Soda too or the surprise won't be that great ^^


"Looks like someone gonna have a girlfriend... or maybe a mate?" Fox said looking at King that was reading the letter and getting very red and very fast.
So King got back to the wolves' house before Fox could say any other word.

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When he was there, he ignored the miles' cubs, that was trying to hunt him, and got inside the bathroom to prepare for whatever is this "surprise" made by Sasha.

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When he was near Sasha's dog house with the Orange Sodas, Daisy gave him a surprise with her usual words.
"Hi, I'm Daisy!"
"Hi! Daisy! Want some Soda?" He asked but them something hit him on his head.

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-Some time later, in a military headquarters at an unknown location-
"Good Job," A human told Daisy, "Now we can begin out research."


Chapter 2 - A help from ****

-The following day; Babylon Gardens-
"Hey Peanut, have you seen King?" Fox asked,
"Sorry Fox, I haven't." Peanut replied,
"You are talking about a short corgi, correct?" A strange dog, who seemingly came from nowhere, asked,
"Y-yes, but who are you?" Fox asked, confused,
"That's none of your concern. If I were you, I would be more concerned about what happened to your friend." The stranger replied.
Joey, who was walking along the other side of the street quickly turned his head to the stranger. After a second, Joey had a sudden moment of realization and ran over quickly, "Hey! You're the creator of one of my favorite animes!" Joey exclaimed, excited,
"Maybe." The stranger replied mysteriously.
Then, just as suddenly and mysteriously as he had appeared, the strange dog disappeared without a trace.
"Well, Joey, who was that guy?" Fox asked,
"He's Dingo, one of the main actors in Wolf's Rain second season." Joey replied,
"But why would he ask me about King?" Fox asked. Neither Peanut or Joey could answer him.

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-In a military headquarters at an unknown location-
"After your latest job well done, we've seen fit to reward you with a new tool for you to use on your next mission." The stranger told Daisy, "And speaking of your next assignment, we've reason to believe that a pet in Babylon Gardens has some sort of magical power. She's a Pomeranian that goes by the name of Tarot. If we can harness her powers, we could create a super-weapon! The world would be ours!" He cackled maniacally, "I need you to find Tarot and capture her!" He ordered.
"Yes, sir!" Daisy replied.
As she replied, a brown dog wearing a green jacket that covers his eyes and ears appeared.

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-Some time later; Babylon Gardens-
"GRAAAAAAAAPE!" Peanut called for Grape, in the same way he always done,
"Can't a cat take a nap in this house?!" Grape asked, annoyed,
"But there's a strange dog in the neighborhood! And Tarot said that he's dangerous!" Peanut said,
"But why don't you talk to him, maybe he's not that bad." Grape suggested, still half asleep,
"But-" Peanut tried to protest,
"BYE PEANUT!" Grape said, pushing him out of her bedroom.
'Well, I guess I could try to talk to him. I hope I'm making the right choice.' Peanut thought as he walked away from Grape's bedroom.

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The new dog, the same dog from the military headquarters, was sniffing the air, maybe searching something, then Peanut came in front of him, a little nervous.
"Hi new dog. I'm Peanut Butter Sandwich, but call me Peanut." He said a little nervous,
"Hi, I'm Daichi, could- See you around."The new dog said starting to go away,
"Oh, hi Tarot!" Peanut looked at his left side and taking Daichi's attention for a Pomeranian running towards Peanut,
"After so many time, I finally found you, Spirit Dragon-"Daichi said,
"Spirit Dragon?Her name is Tarot and she's my girlfriend."Peanut replied,
"Peanut! He's dangerous-"Tarot started to say,
"Dangerous?I'm his father, why would I do something with him?" Daichi cut her out,
"Be-because I foresaw-"She said a little nervous,
"That I gonna-"Daichi started to say,
"Wait! You're my father?"Peanut asked with his puppy eyes,
"Well, Well, well...If it's not a family reunion-"
"So what do you want, Dingo?"Daichi said,
"Nothing, but your son maybe want a hug"
"WHAT?" and Daichi tried to stay away from Peanut, running around and finally, disappearing in a flame wall.
"Hi! I'm Daisy!"Daisy was behind Tarot,
"What?" That was Tarot's last word and the rest was a black memory.

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-In the next day, Babylon Gardens-

Peanut woke up very afraid, thinking if what he saw were true or not.He was thinking to call Grape, but.
"HA! I already here!" The cat said,
"What happened yesterday?" He replied,
"You played video game-"
"I had talked with any new dog?"
"Of course, but tell me about-"
"Sorry, but I need to see Tarot."
"Tarot? She moved from Babylon Gardens-"
"WHAT? That's not true- Wait, maybe Daisy know something."

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-At the same time; In a military headquarters at an unknown location-

Dear, are you sure- Of course, don't you like video games?- Daichi was thinking about his past while seeing Tarot being studied by the scientists,
"Soon you gonna see your mate again-" a human said,
"I don't need to see her again, because I know that she is in a great place." He replied "And don't forget, stay away from Babylon Gardens or-" And he left the military headquarters.
"I was sure that you don't want to do it-"
"Enough Dingo!... We are going to Babylon Gardens to inform then about the mission Eclipse."
"What!? Could you tell me more about-"
"Now that they have that blue bird, the short corgi and the pomeranian... The next step is make a new world where they command."

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-Some time later; Babylon Gardens-

Peanut came back to his house, with a sad face,
"So?" - Grape asked,
"I couldn't find Daisy or Daichi."
Daichi and Dingo appeared between them
"It's because I was doing some business." - Daichi said,
"You guys need to prepare for the worst." - Dingo completed,
"Don't worry I will fix-"
"I will help you." - Peanut replied
--//--
Author's note:

*As you can see, it's a Parallel Universe, where I mixed some characters from my comic project with Housepets universe.
Dingo and Daichi (c) CrazyBalto

And Special Tanks to:
ctcmjh(you're helping me a lot :D )
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I like it so far! Daisy seems like some sort of scary secret agent!
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I wonder what this, Special thing is.
SHE'S TRYING TO GET HIM DRUUNK
i thought it was the other way around.
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This is looking great. King + orange soda = don't mix. lol.
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Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Daisy isn't a common character in fan-fics. On a side note, Balto is one of my favorite movies. :D That is until Housepets!: The Movie comes out. Really, Rick, we need you to consider this. *begs*
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Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... 70#p131370
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lightwolf21 wrote: Daisy isn't a common character in fan-fics.
Daisy is only seem in a few comics in HP.
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Daisy = secret agent? :shock:
Ooo... uberkewl!
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This looks like it could be very interesting I must see more.
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IceKitsune wrote:This looks like it could be very interesting I must see more.
^This
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Hmmm, who are these mysterious people?
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mysterious people doing anime?
Mmmmm...
I KNOW IT!
It's The ACROSS! TU-TUMM!
HEIL, IIIILL PALAZZO!!
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I am, now, even more intrigued.
Heh. Look at that... I started an actual Housepets! fan-fic.
https://www.housepetscomic.com/forums/v ... 70#p131370
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Hah! I knew her being stupid was just an act!
But seriously though, you have my attention.
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lightwolf21 wrote: :D That is until Housepets!: The Movie comes out. Really, Rick, we need you to consider this. *begs*
A Housepets! movie...that would be awesome! ;)
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crazyBalto wrote:
lightwolf21 wrote: :D That is until Housepets!: The Movie comes out. Really, Rick, we need you to consider this. *begs*
A Housepets! movie...that would be awesome! ;)
And yet, so far outta reach...
Let's just stick with t-shirts and fanfics. :)
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Tha Housedog wrote:And yet, so far outta reach...
Let's just stick with t-shirts and fanfics. :)
Talking about fanfics, read the new update. :D
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Capture Tarot? Wouldn't that be impossible? Wouldn't she see them coming a mile away?
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Tha Housedog wrote:Capture Tarot? Wouldn't that be impossible? Wouldn't she see them coming a mile away?
My guess is that they don't know she's psychic. They only know she's magical.
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ctcmjh wrote:
Tha Housedog wrote:Capture Tarot? Wouldn't that be impossible? Wouldn't she see them coming a mile away?
My guess is that they don't know she's psychic. They only know she's magical.
Aah, them Military people. Never do their homework.
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It gonna take a while until the next post... :? (I don't have any good idea yet.)
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Take your time. :)
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YAY! I finally had my creativity back. :lol:
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crazyBalto wrote:YAY! I finally had my creativity back. :lol:
Alright! Does that mean what I think it means? :mrgreen:
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NOTE: if you mix your characters from another project in a crossover, it would be better to help readers understand those characters. I haven't read any of that project, so I'd like to learn more...now...
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it's all so crazy! I LOVE it~

and as valerio say...

HEIL IIIILL PALAZZO!!
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KizerZin wrote:it's all so crazy! I LOVE it~

and as valerio say...

HEIL IIIILL PALAZZO!!
YAY!
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valerio wrote:NOTE: if you mix your characters from another project in a crossover, it would be better to help readers understand those characters. I haven't read any of that project, so I'd like to learn more...now...
You're right...sorry :oops:
Well I gonna tell a review from the past of both:
Dingo-The red and white husky from a city in Brazil, where the pets already are the most and the humans don't exist there anymore.Most of the time in a good mood, he's a good friend of Daichi, until Daichi sold his soul to ***** and after a discussion, Dingo moved to United States thinking that he could be very famous.
Daichi(In the fanfic universe)-The Brown dog that in college he knew a Border Collie, smart, fast reader and with a good heart.Some time later, The two of them were mates, but when Peanut were born, his mate d***.So he decided to give Peanut to a good human couple, than he sold his soul to *****, stayed away from his friends and traveled to others places in America.

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Well, of course that it's more a thought than a review, but I hope that it helps. :roll:
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it's a beginning...
Of course, you have your ficcie to throw in pieces and bits of information to help the reader, so I'll wait patiently.
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I finally could update the fic. :?
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WAIT WHAT!?
THIS ISN'T DEAD!?

Don't worry, this is a good thing, lest I be banhammered by the mods.
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=O_O=

“Take everything you know… and throw it out the window!”
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For once, I agree with Kizerzin.
But it's fun, in a crazy way, keeps you hooked. Also, yay for maniacal chuckle and evil overlord speech :mrgreen:
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