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FOURTH WALL BREAK! FOURTH WALL BREAK! WE'RE ALL DOOMED! DOOOOOOOOOOOMMMED!!!!!

Deirdre is falling fast for Streak it seems. I wonder how that will end...
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copper wrote:FOURTH WALL BREAK! FOURTH WALL BREAK! WE'RE ALL DOOMED! DOOOOOOOOOOOMMMED!!!!!
:lol: It's like he can...see us....
copper wrote:Deirdre is falling fast for Streak it seems. I wonder how that will end...
Badly. Either for Deirdre or Midnight. :?
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It ought to end badly for Streak. He is a heartbreaker. :lol:

And what's up with Peanut? He worries too much. :roll:
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copper wrote:It ought to end badly for Streak. He is a heartbreaker. :lol:
Streak: I am not!
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copper wrote:It ought to end badly for Streak. He is a heartbreaker. :lol:
Streak: I am not!

Oh, come on, Streak! You know you are! Just accept it and kiss the one you love. Be it Deirdre, MIDNIGHT, or Grape...
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copper wrote:
Hopper200456 wrote:
copper wrote:It ought to end badly for Streak. He is a heartbreaker. :lol:
Streak: I am not!

Oh, come on, Streak! You know you are! Just accept it and kiss the one you love. Be it Deirdre, MIDNIGHT, or Grape...
Streak: Wait, Wait, Wait... 1. I know how to do it. 2. Since when Am I in love with Grape?

Midnight: You refuse that you're in love with Grape but not Deirdre........
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I don't know, Sleet, you kissed her. And I am sure there was another way to get rid of her memory, ladykiller!

And you get him, Midnight!
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copper wrote:I don't know, Sleet, you kissed her. And I am sure there was another way to get rid of her memory, ladykiller!
Streak: Ladykiller?!?!

Midnight: You kiss GRAPE too???
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Oh, yeah! You are a ladykiller. How many females have you left broken hearted? Hmm?


And I thought you knew about that, Midnight. Sorry.
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copper wrote:Oh, yeah! You are a ladykiller. How many females have you left broken hearted? Hmm?
Streak: I...You see.....Um,...Well,.....Err....You don't understand...!!
copper wrote:And I thought you knew about that, Midnight. Sorry.
Midnight: *Glares at Streak* He never mentioned it....
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You are a time traveler. You could have loves in every time period.


And, Midnight. Don't worry, I am sure you could make him jealous. :twisted:
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copper wrote:You are a time traveler. You could have loves in every time period.
Streak: ....True...
copper wrote:And, Midnight. Don't worry, I am sure you could make him jealous. :twisted:
Midnight: Yes. I could. Very quickly. Now, Where's Raspberry?.....
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Wait, Raspberry? I thought you were going to pick Sigma or Frosty or something. Isn't Raspberry in a relationship already?
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copper wrote:Wait, Raspberry? I thought you were going to pick Sigma or Frosty or something. Isn't Raspberry in a relationship already?
Midnight:Oh, Right! I forgot. Yes, Sigma will do juuuusssttt fine...

Streak: D: Copper!!
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Hey, don't blame me, Streak. You are the one who fell in love with a jealous type! :lol:
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copper wrote:Hey, don't blame me, Streak. You are the one who fell in love with a jealous type! :lol:
Streak: I have every right to-

Midnight: Oh, Well. I'm sorry that I'm not purple or green...

Streak: That's not it!

Midnight: Then what is?

Streak: Um...
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:lol:

I have a very handsome cat in my home who would love to spend some time with a pretty kitty like you, Midnight. He is a tuxedo cat, so he knows fancy! XD
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copper wrote::lol:

I have a very handsome cat in my home who would love to spend some time with a pretty kitty like you, Midnight. He is a tuxedo cat, so he knows fancy! XD
Midnight: Oh really?? You must introduce him to me!

Streak: M-Midnight!
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His name is Napoleon. He has asked about you, you know. I have his pic up on skype, so get Hopper to show you, Midnight.
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BRLARG! I'M A MONSTER!

Chapter 4 Part 13

-Second Village-Nightfall-
Streak yawned and rubbed his eyes as he started to awake. Deirdre had wrapped all four of her arms around his waist, trapping him into a tight grasp.
"Rrgg..Crud." Streak said trying to wiggle out of her grasp.
She tightened her arms around him still asleep. Streak sighed and took a deep breath. He slipped under her arms and out of her cuddle.
"Bingo." Streak mumbled as he looked at Peanut who was still fast asleep.
He walked over to him and gave him a small shake.
"Hey, Wake up." Streak whispered.
Peanut rustled and moaned quietly.
"S-....Streak?" Peanut whispered and his eyes drowsily gazed at Streak.
"Oh, Good. You're awake."
"Yeah...What time is it?" Peanut said yawning and looking out the doorway to a dark purple sky.
Streak looked down at his wristband and pushed a button.
"Um, Well, If you converted the time to match Earth's time, then 3:45." Streak said looking back up at Peanut.
"Rrgg...Just five mor-"
"No. Come on." Streak said walking to the door.
"Wait, What 'bout the girls?" Peanut standing up.
"We're leaving the them here. We can't risk them to get kidnapped, or hurt again." Streak said waiting at the doorway.
"Oh...Good idea." Peanut said stretching as he walked to the door.
-Minutes later-
Deirdre moved her arms slightly as she awoke.
"S-Streak?" She said as she looked at her empty hands.
"They left." Grape said with a yawn, sitting in the spot she fell asleep in.
Deirdre sighed and stretched her arms.
"To get his ship?"
"Yeah. He seems to like to do things on his own."
"Yeah. He's kinda funny in that way."
"Mm." Grape said nodding.
"He's also very tasty."
".....Wait, What?" Grape said looking at Deirdre.
Deirdre giggled and nodded.
"Wait....You kissed him???"
"Yeah." Deirdre said giggling again.
"But...You do know that he's with someone, right?"
".......He is?" Deirdre said looking at Grape with big eyes.
"Yeah."
"...Oh."
Grape sat there as an awkward silence drew over them both.
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Yup that's how I ended it!
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Well... the awkwardness just shot up quite a bit.

Streak and Peanut are off to do the fighting while Grape and Deirdre are stuck in the hut? How very 50s. :lol:


A lot has happened so far, Hopper. It is refreshing to have a nice relaxing update where very little happened.
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copper wrote:Well... the awkwardness just shot up quite a bit.
We need a awkwardness meter...
copper wrote:Streak and Peanut are off to do the fighting while Grape and Deirdre are stuck in the hut? How very 50s. :lol:
:lol:
copper wrote:A lot has happened so far, Hopper. It is refreshing to have a nice relaxing update where very little happened.
Okay, Good. Don't want to bore you guys!
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Chapter 4 Part 14

Streak stayed behind a large rock with Peanut next to him. He looked at Peanut.
"You ready?" Streak whispered.
"I guess." Peanut whispered back.
"Okay," Streak started as he peeked over the rock.
His face light up when he saw his ship sitting exactly where he left it.
"Bingo." He finished as he grinned widely.
He looked around to see that, surprisingly, there were no one there to guard it.
"What are we waiting for?" Peanut asked also looking over the rock.
"There's no one there."
"Yeah. That's why we should be going now."
"But, Don't you think thats kinda bit suspicious?"
"Maybe a little." Peanut said with a sigh.
"Well, We're going to rush it, then."
"Rush it? You mean-" Peanut said scratching the back of his head.
"Yeah. Run straight to it." Streak said as his grin got bigger as he knelt behind the rock.
He sat still staring at his ship grinning.
"...What are you doing?" Peanut asked looking at Streak.
"Oh. Well, normally it'd end right about there, but, I guess it didn't." Streak said looking around.
"End? What are you talkin-"
"Stuff. Now, to the ship!" Streak said standing up.
"Okay. Now, On three?"
"Yes....Three!" Streak said before charging out in front of the rock and toward the ship.
"S-Streak!" Peanut said following him closely.
"Yell if you see anyone!" Streak said as he suddenly stopped next to the ship.
Peanut tried to stop himself but, he bumped into Streak's back.
"Hey, Careful." Streak said glancing at Peanut, over his shoulder.
"Sorry." Peanut whispered staying close behind him.
Streak pushed a button on his wristband and the door started slowly slide to the side. He stepped in with Peanut following close behind.
"Wow. That was...Easy." Peanut said as the door started to slide shut.
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Yes, it was easy. Too easy. It's almost like there is a trap inside or something.


Streak just loves leaning agaist that wall, doesn't he? :lol:

Good update, Hopper. Way to build suspense.
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copper wrote:Yes, it was easy. Too easy. It's almost like there is a trap inside or something.
Dun-Dun-DUUUUUNNNN!!!
copper wrote:Streak just loves leaning agaist that wall, doesn't he? :lol:
Oh yes. He doesn't like to consider it a wall, but more of a bump, or hill.
copper wrote:Good update, Hopper. Way to build suspense.
Thanks! :D ^^
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IN THIS UPDATE STREAK DIES!

Chapter 4 Part 15

Streak quickly walked to the nearest computer in his ship and started typing on it. His fingers flew across the keyboard and he finished with pushing the enter key.
"Wow, You're fast." Peanut said as scratching his head.
"I've used computers for a long time now." Streak said staring at the screen that was hanging down from the top of the ship.
Streak slowly pushed a small button and the ship jerk a bit.
"Woah!" Peanut said as he fell back onto the floor.
"Careful." Streak said pushing another button.
The ship slowly lifted up into the sky a few feet. Peanut stood up and rubbed his head.
"Where are we go-"
The ship jerked again and Peanut fell back again.
"I said be careful." Streak said shrugging.
The ship glided over the small moon and soon landed in the village.
"IIIII'm back!" Streak said as the door slide open.
He stepped outside and smiled as he walked into the cottage.
"Uh, Streak-" Peanut said as he stumbled out of the ship.
"Not now, Peanut. We got to go and-...Wait....I don't remember there ever being a fountain in this village..." Streak said looking at a water fountain that was sitting in front of Streak.
A crowd of aliens started to group around them from the dark.
"Um, Wrong village." Peanut said hiding behind Streak.
-Second Village-
Grape yawned and curled up again.
"Where are they?" She mumbled as she closed her eyes getting ready for a nice nap.
"I'm sure they'll be back soon, Now, What's this girl's name?" Deirdre said looking at Grape with big eyes.
"Girl? Wha-....Oh, Midnight."
"Mm. Where is she?" Deirdre asked fiddling her fingers.
Grape sighed.
"Earth. Now, I think we should really stop talking about it..."
Deirdre sat there silent.
"...Why?" She asked tilting her head.
Grape ignored her and started to fall asleep again. Deirdre sighed quietly and wrapped her tail around herself.
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You liar, Hopper. Streak didn't die! He better go in the next one! Just kidding

Can Streak ever get it right the first time? Seriously, he needs to learn his lesson and be more careful!

Peanut is doomed. And so is Streak if he leaves and meets back up with Deirdre.
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copper wrote:He better go in the next one!
Streak: Hey!
copper wrote:Can Streak ever get it right the first time? Seriously, he needs to learn his lesson and be more careful!
I know, right!!
copper wrote:Peanut is doomed.
Yes, I know! Bad! Bad!
copper wrote: And so is Streak if he leaves and meets back up with Deirdre.
Now you see...If this happens it wouldn't be bad it'd be more like:
Mayday!Mayday!Mayday!
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Sorry, I meant lives and meets up with her. Not leaves....
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copper wrote:Sorry, I meant lives and meets up with her. Not leaves....
I know. :lol:
Deirdre might want to talk to Streak about Midnight, Which I know, won't be fun for Streak. :lol:
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Streak Is afraid of the color gold? Wait... HE HAS A BROTHER!?!?

Midnight has great taste. Left handed, huh? Wonder if that will come up?
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copper wrote:Streak Is afraid of the color gold? Wait... HE HAS A BROTHER!?!?
Yes he is, And yes, Streak has a brother. He mentions it in Chapter 3 when they are at lunch.
Streak wrote:"...me and my Brother..."
He says something like that. :P
copper wrote:Midnight has great taste. Left handed, huh? Wonder if that will come up?
Maybe. It might get mentioned once or twice.
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It's short.

Chapter 4 Part 16

Streak slowly raised his hands. Peanut looked at him and raised his hands also.
"Get...To...The ship." Streak mumbled in Peanut's direction.
Peanut slowly took a step back, then ran the rest of the way. He quickly ran through the ship's door and ran into the back. Streak's eyes widened and he ran in as well. Streak jumped into the ship and quickly held up his arm.
"Peanut!!!" Streak said as he pushed a button on his wristband.
"What? I did what I was told to do!!"
"Yeah, I didn't tell you to run! I was hopin-"
"Does it matter? We're both alive!" Peanut said as the door slide shut.
"Yes." Streak started as he stood up. "We are."
He pushed a button on a control panel that was attached to the side of the ship. Peanut slowly stood up and brushed himself off. Suddenly, the ship jerked forward and Peanut flew back onto the floor.
"Ack!" Peanut yelled as he fell.
"Care-"
"I know..." Peanut said as he stood up again.
The ship quickly flew over the moon and to the second village. It landed and the door opened slowly. Streak peeked his head out and looked around.
"This is the right one, right?" Streak said as he stepped outside.
"Heh. Yes it is." Peanut said following.
"Grape? Deirdre?" Streak called out quietly.
"There you are." Grape said walking out of the cottage.
"Grape was worried about you." Deirdre said giggling.
Streak chuckled.
"Well, we should get going. We uh...Might have attracted the wrong kind of attention." He said as he gestured to the ship's door.
Grape sighed and stepped into the ship. Deirdre followed and purposefully tripped on the door. Streak grabbed her hand before she could fall.
"Careful." Streak said pulling her up.
Deirdre giggled and walked into the ship.
"Wow. It's uh, White." Deirdre said as she stepped into a part where she could be out of the way.
"Yeah." Streak said as the door closed with them all in it.
He pushed a button and the ship started to raise into the air.
-First Village-
The chief smiled as he saw the ship start to take off.
"Send in the spider." He whispered grinning.
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ooh! The spider comes back. His venom will destroy them all! Or not, I don't know...


Great update, Hopper. Peanut just couldn't control himself, huh?

That chief sure wants his ship, huh? I wonder why he wants off that moon so badly.
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copper wrote:His venom will destroy them all!
A thing that big could probably destroy the whole planet with venom...
copper wrote:Great update, Hopper.
Thanks! :D :D
copper wrote:That chief sure wants his ship, huh? I wonder why he wants off that moon so badly.
You shall see, later....
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Oh, we shall see? I wonder what that could mean! :lol:


Streak is so oblivious when it comes to girls, huh? Deirdre was being pretty obvious.
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Sadly, Yes. Yes he is. (Don't tell him I said that. =P)

And, Deirdre is dying for attention from Streak. ;)
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Hopper200456 wrote:Sadly, Yes. Yes he is. (Don't tell him I said that. =P)

And, Deirdre is dying for attention from Streak. ;)
Lol Fixed.

Anyhoo, Sorry I haven't been commenting much. It's just that whenever there is a new post, I think it's an update, but it's really just you and someone RPing. So I've been ignoring this. Sorry.
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Private Elliot wrote: Lol Fixed.
Lol Thanks. :lol:
Private Elliot wrote:Anyhoo, Sorry I haven't been commenting much.
Not a problem.
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Re: Changing time. Season 1 Adventures begin!

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Chapter 4 Part 17

The ship slowly started to raise into the sky. Streak pushed a few different colored buttons and the ship started to turn itself to the side.
"Almost got it." Streak said grinning.
The ship shook violently and everyone fell back. Streak instantly jumped back up.
"What the crap!?" Streak yelled looking at the nearest computer screen.
"W-What happened?" Peanut asked slowly standing up.
"Where did you learn to drive???" Grape said helping Deirdre up.
"Somewhere you wouldn't know, Now give me a sec." Streak said as he typed pressed on the a few buttons.
The ship shook again and everyone jerked back again.
"Grah! What's going on???" Deirdre asked rubbing her side.
"I'm not sure, But, Someone might be attacking us." Streak explained as he ran over to the other side of the ship.
"Don't you have any weapons on this thing?" Grape asked as she stood up.
"Well, Yeah! But I got set them up first!" Streak said pressed buttons on a control panel.
The ship shook and there was a smashing sound.
"What? No! Crud!" Streak said pushing more buttons.
"What happened?" Peanut asked running next to him.
"We are under attack and they just smashed out our teleportation field!"
"So what?" Deirdre asked brushing her self off.
"We can't leave with out it!" Streak said pounding at the buttons.
"Why can't we just fly away?" Peanut asked placing a hand on his shoulder.
"This....'Thing' is blocking the way." Streak started as he rubbed his forehead. "We have to distract it!"
"What is 'it'?" Deirdre asked tilting her head slightly.
"Why don't we find out." Streak said as he opened the door to the ship.
The door slide open slowly as the ship hovered in the air.
"What? No! Stupid!" Streak said pounding a hand into his palm.
"What is it?" Grape asked looking over Streak's shoulder.
"It's the stinkin' spider!" Streak said stumbling back.
The spider lifted one of his legs and plunged it toward the ship.
"H-Hold on!" Streak said as he jumped back into the ship.
Everyone quickly laid against the ship's ground. The spiders leg smash through the ship and sent it flying into the ground with a loud crash. Smoke and dirt cover the hole that the ship rested in.
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