HPU: Exotic Acres OOC

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Tue Apr 28, 2015 6:55 pm

well to be honest those character seems a little bit.......simple , nothing's wrong with them , just that they're kinda simple , which is not exactly a bad thing . I guess what I'm trying to say is I have no problem with Civilization's characters , but it would be nice to put a little more detail into them , if he/she wants , of course , no big deal .

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Tue Apr 28, 2015 6:58 pm

Do you have a suggestion, I would be glad to try and put more if I had something to build off of.

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Tue Apr 28, 2015 7:04 pm

well....that's kind of the problem ^^" , I can't think of any right now , because technically speaking everything is there , you're not missing anything really . So........up to you and the others I guess ^^"

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Wed Apr 29, 2015 3:15 pm

So, do I have to fix anything or is it okay for me to post now.

Wed Apr 29, 2015 3:50 pm

no one brought anything else up, what Serence brought up can be fixed through actually playing (stuff like fleshing out their personality a bit more, adding likes and dislikes, maybe a bit more emotional depth)

so I'll say yes, go ahead and post.

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Thu May 07, 2015 9:01 am

that awkward moment when you have a bunch of things happening in front of your character's eyes and you can't come up with any responses what so ever DX

Thu May 07, 2015 3:16 pm

serence ice fox wrote:that awkward moment when you have a bunch of things happening in front of your character's eyes and you can't come up with any responses what so ever DX

at least they aren't singing "Can you feel the love tonight" that could be awkward for both our characters (assuming Storm's seen Lion King)

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu May 07, 2015 3:47 pm

Great idea! Thanks, Brent!

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Thu May 07, 2015 7:45 pm

Hlaoroo wrote:Great idea! Thanks, Brent!

see what you've done brent ?

and yeah she did see it

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Thu May 07, 2015 7:48 pm

In Upedi! Where the passion fruit grows sweet!

Hotep the psychic · Post by **Hotep the psychic** » Thu May 07, 2015 9:28 pm

Where the hippos swing from the jungle vines
And the rhino rhumba in a conga line
And the pink flamingoes are intertwined
As the stars come out to play

YAY!

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu May 07, 2015 9:49 pm

RandomGeekNamedBrent wrote:
serence ice fox wrote:that awkward moment when you have a bunch of things happening in front of your character's eyes and you can't come up with any responses what so ever DX
at least they aren't singing "Can you feel the love tonight" that could be awkward for both our characters (assuming Storm's seen Lion King)

Sooo... About that... *shifty eyes and giggles*

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Tue May 12, 2015 2:11 pm

I made icons! The originals belong to Rick Griffin, I just colored over them.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Wed May 20, 2015 7:15 am

Erm, Mickey, there's no way Delilah is going to be able to see waiting area from the consult room, nor would she be able to move fast enough to catch Mario anyway given that her ribs are fractured and Geoff is hanging onto her leg. Clinics are designed for discreteness and privacy for the clients so even if the consult room door is open they're not going to see into the waiting area or be seen from the same. The way I see it, there's a small hallway to the side of the desk in which there's two consult rooms next to each other, and then the larger surgery and wet area and cage area through a door at the end of the hall.

On a related note Geoff was stunned because the owners just walked into the consult room uninvited. For all they knew when they walked in Delilah could have been out the back somewhere and it could have been a completely unrelated pet in the consult room so Geoff thinks it was very rude of them to just barge in especially given he had no clue who they were.

So, could you edit your last post please? You could have Mario land on one of the other pets or a chair or grab one of the roos' tails if you want. I just can't see any way for Delilah to know what was happening out there or to react to it. It's partly my fault for not describing the clinic better so sorry about that.

The icons look great, by the way!

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Mon May 25, 2015 10:38 am

sorry for not posting guys , kinda at a lost after Brent not noticing Stomp's attempt to make small talk , so kinda stuck trying to come up with something

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Mon May 25, 2015 12:40 pm

I believe Storm's getting fussed over by Maria and Luther, like every other pet. I feel like I should McKee character sheets for them.

What you need to do, is tell them to come get these two Indian animals! They've been here for nearly a week.

That's our fault actually. We were supposed to send them back to Exotic Acres a while ago, but no one was playing.

Hotep the psychic · Post by **Hotep the psychic** » Mon May 25, 2015 2:52 pm

at least those two didn't see us yet huh cooper?
Quiet you youll give them ideas......but that is a good point

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Mon May 25, 2015 2:57 pm

Oh, you two were next.

Tue May 26, 2015 12:09 am

serence ice fox wrote:sorry for not posting guys , kinda at a lost after Brent not noticing Stomp's attempt to make small talk , so kinda stuck trying to come up with something

hey, you didn't make it clear it was directed specifically at me, so I assumed I wasn't the only one who could respond

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Tue May 26, 2015 12:10 am

true , true , I guess that is a fair point

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Tue May 26, 2015 8:27 am

The roos did call to Met while they were freaking out though, Brent. Perhaps he could reassure them? They're still pretty shaken up.

Wed May 27, 2015 1:31 am

that one I saw, but they calmed down immediately, and Met was thrown of by the people messing with his Mane

I'll see what I can do

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Wed May 27, 2015 2:01 am

Oh, they haven't calmed at all. They're about to bolt, in fact. They're just making sure the humans are far enough away that they can't block their escape route.

Hlaoroo wrote:they'd never yet been poked, prodded or petted and they'd found the experience unsettling and uncomfortable. In their fear they've forgotten entirely about Mario and they glance nervously between the humans and the door, their hearts still thudding as they pant.

But you're right, Met was distracted...
Perhaps Storm could help him do something to calm them since she hasn't been poked yet?

Wed May 27, 2015 2:32 am

well, calmed slightly from about to hit the humans

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Wed May 27, 2015 7:06 pm

Can we make another character?

Or do we have too many for one rp?

*hopefully holds up pencil and paper*

Thu May 28, 2015 12:50 am

I usually try to limit my RPs to 2 main characters per player.
though if the other players want you to add another I'd allow it.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu May 28, 2015 3:10 am

What are you intending with the character? Is it to be another main or a minor?

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Thu May 28, 2015 5:09 am

He'll be nothing but a minor character. He'll appear from time to time for a lot of different reasons.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Thu May 28, 2015 5:31 am

That seems acceptable. If Brent is happy with that then I am.

Post by **Serence Frostbite** » Thu May 28, 2015 5:33 am

yeah that would be alright for me too , I do that from time to time too XD

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Thu May 28, 2015 7:52 pm

Brent, is it ok for another character?

Thu May 28, 2015 10:05 pm

yeah, minor characters are fine

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Thu May 28, 2015 11:41 pm

Yeah! This guy has been one of two characters in the back of my mind for a while.

Character Name: Elliot Cu'cua (Prefers to be called E)

Color: Pink, the color of his eyes. (Mario's color is the color of Delilah's eyes and vice versa)

Type: Minor

Species/Breed: Dingo

Age: 4 human years = 14 pet years

Appearance: E is light grey with dark blue markings on his arms, legs, chest, and forehead. He has an even lighter under belly and his under paws are a navy blue. He is missing some of his right ear. He has light pink eyes, almost the soothing color of a new spring flower. He wears sash with a holster in the back, which holds his many homemade boomerangs and other things of his, such as paint. He wears brown leather wrappings around his ankles and brown leather bracers. The bracers are set with green gems. He hides his paint brushes in them.

Personality: E is an Australian brumby. He is rough and tumble like his pet sister and can't resist a race or a quick sparing match. He is also caring and kind, helping others even when he doesn't have to. Despite what his species is, E can't stand to hurt anther animal. He doesn't eat meat often and settles for fruits and vegetables. It's because of this that he has slices of fruits and vegetables in his holster. He has an Australian accent and is extremely afraid of hurting another. He is a skilled artist and carries around pencils, paper, and other drawing supplies.

History: Much like his pet brother and sister, E was intrigued by the two humans watching his pack. He began to follow them, but a rival pack took it as him going against the set boundaries. They set out an ambush and E was luckily to make it out with just the injury to his ear. He succeeded in finding the humans and their "pets". They took him back with them, at first only to care for his wounds, but soon became a pet.

S.P.E.C.I.A.L Stats

- Strength: 5

- Perception: 5

- Endurance: 7

- Charisma: 5

- Intelligence: 7

- Agility: 7

- Luck: 6

Despite the detailed description, he is a minor character. He won't be controlled as much and will only appear when Delilah and Mario aren't available or I need to get something somewhere else and the two are busy.

Fri May 29, 2015 12:34 am

Mickey wrote:Species/Breed: Dingo

uh oh, the roos aren't going to do well with that.

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Fri May 29, 2015 12:41 am

Fully aware~

I'm assuming he's in?

Also:
Dhole
Degu
Dingo

I didn't do this on purpose!

Fri May 29, 2015 1:22 am

well, if no one objects in the next 24 hours you can add him in.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Fri May 29, 2015 10:03 am

Ooh. Now that's going to take the roos a while to get used to! *giggle*

Mickey · Post by **Mickey** » Sat May 30, 2015 11:55 am

Hey, can someone post? I don't want to double post.

Civilization · Post by **Civilization** » Sat May 30, 2015 12:04 pm

Yeah, sure, and done... Needed to post here anyway.

Post by **Hlaoroo** » Sat May 30, 2015 12:18 pm

Sorry, I've had seveal exams in the past couple of weeks and I have finals in two weeks so I've been busy. I'll make sure to up my game.