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Joined: Sat May 19, 2018 9:17 am
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Here's the deal: I'm writing a story, and i want to share it,
Sooooo i will post it here so you can read it and give me your opinion, and you can help me with the story. (CoughcoughImRunningOutOfIdeascoughcough).
Well, here goes nothing....

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Cold.

It feels.......Cold.

Where am i?

I open my eyes slightly.....

I only see.....

Snow.

I realize that I am lying in the snow.

I get up slowly.

It's kinda cute actually.

...........

Wait....snow? But we are in summer.... and what I'm doing here?

"Mom.....do i fall asleep outside again?"

But then i realize that there's no one here....not a house or street, no person or animal....just me...

"I'm at middle of knowhere?! How do i finish here?!?!"

I try to calm myself, trying to understand what was going on.....but it gets worse when I realize something important.....

"Wait.....Who i am!?!?"

That simple question scared me in many ways.....how do i forget who i am....or was.....

"This is not funny!! I dont know how am i....where am i and how to go back home! I'm dirty, half-frozen and hungry!!!"


my stomach roared with that last word ... I was very hungry ... and there was nothing to eat except snow....

All this sound like something you dont believe will happen to you ever, until it happens.

So like me or not, i have to search something for eat. So i start walking.....

"This cannot be worse..."

For some reason, i feel that I'm wrong with that........

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Wed Jun 13, 2018 4:41 pm
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