U.S.C. SAVVAL - The path of the ooze.
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- Harry Johnathan
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Re: U.S.C. SAVVAL - The path of the ooze.
I love how bittersweet this ending is. The status quo has been utterly demolished and the atmosphere is extremely tense. Great job!
Sarah was afraid, so she lied and said, “I did not laugh.” But [The LORD] said, “Yes, you did laugh.” - Genesis 18:15 (NIV).
- Amazee Dayzee
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Re: U.S.C. SAVVAL - The path of the ooze.
Great chapter but there is no way you know exactly WHAT Elena is gonna want for a wedding. LOL. We need to start messaging so I can write out her scenes for you again in RP form.
Anyway really enjoyed the story! Wonderful work and a good ending!
Anyway really enjoyed the story! Wonderful work and a good ending!