Hi,there!I'm crono and i'm new here.I want to show my first fic here .It's a short fic.Hope you guys like it .Thanks to copper for correction .
In the evening at Babylon Garden, the Sandwich House.
"Good night,Grape."Peanut said as he went to his bedroom.
"Good night,Peanut."Grape replied and went to her room.
Peanut walked to his room, laying down on his bed.
"I wish you were mine,Grape"He said with a low voice before he closed his eyes.
When he awoke,he saw an empty room.He was there with Grape next to him."Hi,Grape."he said.But,as soon as he greeted her,Grape started fading.Peanut was panicked.He tried to hold Grape, but it didn't help.He was there next to her, but all he could do was watch as Grape slowly faded away.His tears started to come out.
"GRAPEEEE!"
"Peanut,Peanut!Wake up!"
Peanut look around for awhile.He was in his bedroom with Grape beside him.
"Huh?What's happening?"He asked.
"You were screaming my name over and over.I thought you were in danger.Are you okay?Did you have a nightmare?"Grape asked anxiously.
He stayed silent for awhile.Then,he opened his mouth,"Oh,Grape.It was horrible!We were in an empty space then I said hello, but as soon as I spoke, you started fading and disappeared!"He said with tears on his face.
Then,Grape looked him in the eyes.His tears began to soak his face.He was so scared.He was shaking, scared to be alone.
"Peanut, I will never leave you.I will always be here for you.No matter what happens."She said with a soft voice, placing her paw on his shoulder.
"Promise?" he whimpered.
"Promise."
They hugged for awhile, Peanut glad that Grape was there to help him.
"Okay Peanut,you need to go back to sleep. 'Kay?"Grape said.
"Okay. But,Grape?W-would you sleep with me?Only for tonight.... I don’t want to have another nightmare."He said with hope that she'll say yes.
"Okay,Nutty.But you must promise that you will go to sleep."She said with a purr.
Peanut just nodded with a smile as Grape laid down beside him.
"I love you,Grape."
"I love you too,Peanut."She replied and gave him a good night kiss.
Then,they snuggled and slept.
The nightmare had turned into the best dream that Peanut ever had.
Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
Re: Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
short and sweet... like a execution by the nazis
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Re: Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
cool.
Forever bored,
Forever excited,
Forever in love,
Forever lonely,
Forever understood,
Forever misunderstood,
Forever bad,
Forever good,
We are everything.
Forever excited,
Forever in love,
Forever lonely,
Forever understood,
Forever misunderstood,
Forever bad,
Forever good,
We are everything.
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Lovly, lovly..but seems like heheh forget it... i wanna see how you will put the story with the other neighborhood pets.
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Re: Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
Nice little one off story. Very sweet indeed. I enjoyed reading it immensely.
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Re: Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
...must...fight...urge to say.............D'AAAAAWWWWW...dang...lol
Nice one-off...short and sweet
Nice one-off...short and sweet
Hey you're reading this!
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Re: Nightmare (Housepets! Fanfic)
Thanks guys .I'm glad you like it .